by Shaun Lawton
interesting ending, ie. dawn/afternoon.it gives me the feeling you get as the sun rises (or the earth revolves toward the sun) and coats the world in light, but with this willfull sort of explosiveness and intensity, almost like anger..? some pretty violent verbs are used: implodes, burns, fury, fist flies, grabs... et cetera.good stuff.
Burnt Toast Fury, good name for a band : )
man i seen BTF like six times \m/
i edited this today, deleting 'God's' andcapitalizing fist.
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