by Shaun Lawton
I relish living in the last days of civilization.And it's fair when it all turns a bit more harsh. I'm not quite ready, but I hope to be ready for the Last Picnic.Your images are potent, especially for the Ancient Catholic in me.
Thank you steven. I struck out thefinal line: "Alleyes rise to thesky". I like itbetter now.
Update:The author has re-instated the original final line to this poem.
Final Update:The author has redrafted this poemand reconfigured the final line. Let it be finished.
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